Compare of two poems and comment

POEM





WHY,, JUST WHY…!!!

Lisa Chicharello



Why everyone has a good life?
Why im the one who has a depressing life?
Why im getting yelled at everyday?
Why i have a few friends?
Why im always grounded?
Why im always sad?
Why im always lonely?
Why no one talks to me?
Why no one cares about me?
Why nobody listens to me?
Why everyone sees me different?
Why nobody hang out with me?
Why im like this?
I dont wanna be like this..
Just why?















A Little Child Is My Master

Aroon George


A little child is my master
I'm met by him to my nature
He does not worry his past
He does not care to future

Smiles dance on his face
In the joy and serious case
He is hurt he forgets
He lives in joy with bless

He teaches me a holy lesson
I can live happy in the tension
An elder does not know love
A child knows he is above

I started respect the children
He shows me a way of heaven
We are wise but we get zero
He loves us he is a hero

I get a child when I meet
I feel I'm child it's sweet





















1. Compare of two poems and coment



a. My personal preferences

- In the first of poem,with the title “Why,,Just Why”, the language is easy to understanding. This poem tell about sadness with coming up short in his live.

The poem is full of fury, full of tear, full of annoyed, full of dissapointed and the poem full of question too.



- But i better like the second of poem with the title “A Little Child Is My Master by Aroon George” because in the second poem we get corse of humility when very small matter even if can become Iesson which be a consider.



Ø the two of them is very diffirent. In the fist poem, the poem is very easy to understand while the poem is look so sad and angry, and in the second poem, the poem look so happy, full proud, wonderfull.



b. The moral of poem, message or ideologies from the two poem.

- In the first poem, we can get a valuable lesson when life is not always beautiful, sometimes we get a trouble in the live, but it is a valuable lesson in the life. don't always bewail all problems without evocation. And we must to stand up to get a good future in the life.



- In the second poem we can get one valuable when we can get sains from whoever, like the second poem the writer get sains and knowledge of the life from the little child. So, we must to still have lower self and esteeming all people.



c. The beauty of the language used

- In the first poem, the language is very simple, so i dont see the beautifule language in the first poem, but in the first poem we can see the fact of the life.



- I see beauty language and deep purpose in the second poem. Example : Smiles dance on his face. And an elder does not know love but the child know.



This poem using bare language and the language is hard to undertsanding. But if you has understand what the writer mind, you will aware the big meaning in this poem.











2. (Re)define



a. Literature

Literature is a term used to describe written or spoken material. Broadly speaking, "literature" is used to describe anything from creative writing to more technical or scientific works, but the term is most commonly used to refer to works of the creative imagination, including works of poetry, drama, fiction, and nonfiction.

Literature represents a language or a people: culture and tradition. But, literature is more important than just a historical or cultural artifact. Literature introduces us to new worlds of experience. We learn about books and literature; we enjoy the comedies and the tragedies of poems, stories, and plays; and we may even grow and evolve through our literary journey with books.

Literature : Litericher.





b. Poetry – poem



· Poeitry is the most intensely emotive of literary forms, in a sense, it does all that prose can do, in developing its theme in a carefully-ordered sequence of statments. as well poetry employs the techniques of verse, making sound and formal structure part of its means of expressions. finally, it display that almost indefinable quality of emotional and imaginative impact that earns it the name of poetry.

· Poem is an experience,yes,but the poem is representing an criticism experience,and the poem is important instruct only at making reader, that is more aware of experience coverage and deepness.



ü The two of poetry an poem is same using difficult language for understand, sometimes poetry and poem depicting someone with something that do not thought up. Like this, sometimes the writer write the wommen is like red rose in june. Its difficult to understand before we read and comprehend what the writer mind.

But poetry and poem having the beauty of every sentence.

















Robert Louis Stevenson (2010) Literature

Avaible at http://classiclit.about.com/od/literaryterms/g/aa_whatisliter.htm

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Wales Jimmy (2010) Poetry in a personal appeal

Avaible at http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Literature

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Wales Jimmy (2010) Poem in a personal appeal

Avaible at http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Literature

Accesed on : November 24, 2011